Lalo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Awesome Gaiden]

Very funny!

i did like it... but id like to see a flash about something other than awesomeesque stuff from you... OH NEVERMIND because it would obviously get a lower score than your usual awesome shorts since its not about videogames... THEN AGAIN you're egoraptor so everyone would like totally go and vote 5 in it :)

The animation in this one was much better than usual, good work. the ending was weird tho, i tought the movie hadnt loaded properly or something cause it ends so abruptly...

[Guitar Battle]

Not too good, but the length makes up for it

You could had used a higher framerate too. Your animations were nice, and i was liking your camera angles until you overdid them, after that i started to get dizzy with all the stretches and squashes you used! These were VERY unecesary, they are not cool ok :C

Some of your backgrounds and objects were HORRIBLY traced. Specially some of the guitars and the stage. Some of them were passable and had too much detail to be handmade, like the streets.

Also, you had ALOT of holes in your characters, and they are more noticeable in low quality which was the default here, so always remember to check your drawings for these holes, and use the brush's "paint behind" function to (duh) paint behind them. And ALWAYS distribute your stuff in layers, even your backgrounds. One layer for the actual background, then one for the stuff over it, then one for the lighting or something, etc, you get the idea :)

[Super Mario Hyadain]

Nice

I liked it even if the stereotypical anime characters didnt suit mario ones too well. the lipsyncing sucked, japanese lipsync is so lazy. there wasnt much animation here either, i could easily count the keyframes :P

The graphics were ok, the music was entretaining, but it all got boring when it repeated itself, then it got a fun again when luigi started singin... by the way, that luigi appearing on every yoshi sound got VERY annoying after the first couple of times.

I liked it, it was awesome for a practice movie :)

[Grand Theft Awesome]

MMH dissapointing

I was expecting more from a Frontpage featured awesome parody. I liked the jokes but i think you didnt do enough of them and just were centered around a couple, like the cheats thing, pretty much. Theres ALOT of material to parody, and you just didnt. I liked the references to the original awesome parodies tho, even if they seemed a bit forced. also, your voice got annoying after the first half.

Also, you cant complain this is being badly rated. you SHOULDNT be expecting more than a 4.3 AT MAX, and your rate's like way over it. the other awesome parodies which have more quality than this have a lower rate. so i think this is definitely overrated, and lacks some quality. im AWARE its supossed to be crappy, like all the awesomeshorts, but this didnt didnt really look crappy on purpose

[Owls]

Boring

it was a bit better than your usual looping music thingies, but i stopped finding it funny like 10 secs after it started. you should do something better, more like a walk in the woods :)

[Indiada Jodes]

EXCELLENT

I like how you call the cyrstal skull the thing. so brilliant!

[xXDarnells TimeXx]

Nice can shots

you definitely need to work with human shapes tho. Darnell's arm is all like flexed while hes shooting. that doesnt make sense, people stretch their arms forward when they're going to shoot. your animation is decent, it looks like you'll be able to improve much :)

WAaAzZAaA responds:

omg you really commented my moviee! thanks so much, drawing human shapes are realy difficult to me, but the part of darnell umm....i knew dat but i was trying to give it that ´n***a´ style....if you know what im sayin?

thnaks 4 the review

[Splash Attack]

umm

Im sure reviewers have missed the point in this film since they're all voting 10 :)

[Tom's Wedding Day!]

:D!

you actually finished it... i gave up :C

[End of the Row]

EXCELLENT!

you're great at animating, you still have alot of room for improvement tho :) i liked your original camera angles, they were really inmersive. i cant believe this has a lower score than those stupid videogame parodies, THIS is the kind of material that should be on the top 50 of all time!

this is going to my favourites :D keep the great work!