NICE IDEA, BUUT...
i think you OVERUSED the blur efect... my crappy computer couldnt stand so much blur and the animation freezed at some points... blur efect looks awesome, butit gets annoying after a while.
nice concept, although the graphics were not too good, pico's look suited perfectly to the story... whih i loved...
yeah i think those are the most critical points in your movie, everything else was cool, i liked the intro music, and some details i found here and there.
:D