PRETTY GOOD
it starts nicely, with some supense, and then the action suposedly starts, but thats where the problem arises. the action goes too slow, its supossed to go with the rythm of the music but it should've gone 2X fast at least..
i specially loved when the penilian appeared, what a good sequence man! and then when pico shoots it in the head, nice one too, good job in those ones...
so its pretty much good, excellent work at the FBF sequences, the bad thing is the pace of the movie pretty much :C
good job, hope to see more from you soon :)