Lalo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[What All OldPeople Can Do]

hah, nice!

This one is actually good, just a bit short. its a real shame it has less score than that your dumb flash dancer test, i dont know whats going on with the viewers... it still has quite a high score tho, you shouldnt complain ;) this is no waterlollies.

DonkeysBazooka responds:

ha. ur a dick. thanks though. i'm glad everyone else has a different opinion than you about flash dancer. i put a shitload of hours into that

[Flash Dancer]

Nice!

It was funny, Nice way to show your skills. but you still have a long way to go. Hope to see something better from you next time ;) you got skills.

DonkeysBazooka responds:

ok thanks... a long way to go to where?

[Base 17 ::03::]

Im amazed :D

This looks very proffesional, more than any other anime series i have seen (which i dont like much by the way, but this one's good enough :D)

You did a great job with the camera angles, and decent work with the character animation, and overall its good, BUT theres much stuff you can improve, like:

- The backgrounds: they are lazily made, like just a couple of lines and solid colors. you should add shadows and details. i specially hated the last backgrounds from this chapter, they were just an open field with solid squares at the background, no real scene. work on them :)

-The character designs: I HATE stereotypical anime characters, and in this case, they all look alike exept for color changes. I wouldnt had complained if they were at least nicely designed, but MOST of your character haircuts are very ugly and lazy. I'm exagerating a bit, i cant help it... but seriously, work a bit more on them.

- Facial expressions: just move the eyes and eyebrows a bit, or make them blink so they dont look so much like robots.

The voices were great, i specially liked the dialogue at the end, it even has a message :) great work, hope to see more from you!

Bubbowrap responds:

Thank youuu! professional is too much for a pauper like me, eh?

...what?

But, thanks; backgrounds, haha. I shall try my best. I've always focused more on the characters, but backgrounds are important too, eh?

xD Somewhat true! Will work on that too.

-Totally agree with this point. Believe me, anything that has to do with character animation will be looked into and/or fixed.

I loved the voices, too! When I received them, I was like, 'Wow. These guys are awesome.'

Thanks again! Unless something large happens, I'll try to put it out before the end of the year!

[xXDarnells TimeXx]

Nice can shots

you definitely need to work with human shapes tho. Darnell's arm is all like flexed while hes shooting. that doesnt make sense, people stretch their arms forward when they're going to shoot. your animation is decent, it looks like you'll be able to improve much :)

WAaAzZAaA responds:

omg you really commented my moviee! thanks so much, drawing human shapes are realy difficult to me, but the part of darnell umm....i knew dat but i was trying to give it that ´n***a´ style....if you know what im sayin?

thnaks 4 the review

[GT - Monster Trainer]

OMG WOOT

so here we have Gamer Tonight - Monster Training, another flash movie about videogames and part of its own series with a score of 4.3 and a review average of 9.5... seems a bit overrated.

ok so i like this series, i like videogame parodies, this one is nicely done even if its a bit short and dumb. its definitely audience appealing and very well done for the short time you had to do these for TV.

nice work, id like something new tho.

RubberNinja responds:

Yeah, I always say it's quite overrated myself. But all thats not really for me to decide, sadly.

The series finished as of 1 week ago, so what you're seeing now is just a backlog of the TV airings. After that's said and done it will become "something new".

Thanks for the review! :)

[SSBB Theme Decoded]

LOL SO ORIGINAL

you just did what everyone else has done in youtube but with even dumber meanings... and you're getting 4.1 so far, and an average of 9.0... what kind of newgrounds is this? so yea i MIGHT do one of these with pettier graphics and get a daily just like you OMG!

lol, honestly, it wasnt that bad, but since its so overrated i have to balance that, so your real score is a 4 but im putting it 1 ^_^ you're cool jonbro. i think i was a bit too bitchy, sorry :C

BottleCapClock responds:

We didn't even know it was done on Youtube until after we made this, actually. lol
Oh and BottleCapClock isn't >=(

[RWD: 007 Eazy Duz It]

lol

different from your usual stuff tho, you actually used brush here :O

Luis responds:

lalo, how dare you for giving me such a score. ctrl+z on sending you my tablet.

[BoB the bot]

pretty sexy

so it wasnt a super awesome movie,still, it was really good for an experiment. the lighting was excellent and the animation too, but there was too much gray in my opinion, should've added some more variety to the robots' color : P and some more lenght would had been apreciated :)

but that doesnt matter, it was a good movie EXEPT for the sound of the walking robots, it was VERY annoying >:C

im done here, hope to see some epic stuff later from you.

EvilSeed responds:

mmh... color? BoB is a lil bit blueish and the others yellow...ish... but yeah, still not very noticeable... and as i said i was restricted on the lenght with the filesize... every frame is a diferent image so... it keeps growing and growing...

...and your review score is the lowest until now >:(... but thanks :)

[Pass-my-Flash 1]

its cool and original

i liked it alot, BUT the ending wasnt good, it seemed rushed, specially the "explosion", it was supossed to end all orgasmic like the song but instead of that we get a countdown and a not-so-well-made explosion :C

still, awesome collab, i really hope to see more of these soon, and maybe participate or something...

- you should credit the author in the left side thing, since its a newgrounds song :)

Luis responds:

its not a newgrounds song, but yeah maybe something orgasmic would have been cool but the author of that part saw that as the solution so i cant blame him.

[Tetris Unleashed 3]

sexy, aside of some story things i didnt like

it was nice, i love tetris and this was pretty cool. but cmon, the GOD of tetris... you should've used the "master" of tetris instead of god, since a god is not made by completing tasks and stuff, the tetris god should be the one that suposedly created tetris and that world and stuff, i dont know...

still, it was pretty cool altho it lacked some sound effects, and nthe graphics were, as others have said, kinda blocky and lacked some detail, but still excellent.

and HOW YOU DARE to use 2 lines of 2 blocks as the rockets, you should've used the square instead of them, since it has 4 blocks....
nice ending by the way, the answer to that question was pretty cool, something we all tetris fans know :D

Jimtopia responds:

Well, the creator of something isn't necessarily the best at it, and I think Jim earned the title of tetris God. About the 2 lines of 2 blocks, when I did that part it was really late, and I wasn't really thinking about that, but you're right, that would have been better.