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Lalo

Age/Gender: n/a, Male
Location: Veracruz MX
Job: Student/Animator

Lalo (pronounced Lah-lo by the way, and not Lay-lo) is the diminutive of Edward in spanish. Yeah I know it doesnt make sense at all. :B

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Flash Reviews: 153
Music Reviews: 12
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Score: 8
I.E.S. ep.1

"Amazing!"

submission: I.E.S. ep.1
date: July 31, 2008

Excellent movie, the script was well writen and its nicely animated, the jokes were funny overall and the character designs were cool and not stereotypical or boring :D They did keep me interested... BUT I think they lack some charisma and expression, specially the main guy, he was always with that same tone of voice and face, and that one thing did get me a bit bored. I think you have to work a bit more to define the characters' personalities

Other than that, it was excellent, you did a great work!! Also, a recomendation: In later chapters, you should start adding more side stories, maybe with the dad an mom or their friends etc, you might had tought about it already, but remember to make them good :D thats all. Hope to see more from you!

August 1, 2008

Author's Response:

I completely agree with you, but I dont wanna rush things in and cram the viewer with characters. I have many characters which I think are interesting lined up.

I knew I recognized that name!... Lalo... we were both fighting the good fight on the first annual Pico Day.

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Score: 7
The Killing Murderer

"Really funny!"

date: July 31, 2008

You have improved alot in your animation, from your character movements to your backgrounds, they're prettier than ever :) The sound effects were great, very varied. The voices were good too, exept at the end, they lost a bit of emotion there. The lipsyncing was excellent, but the character's expressions could have used some work, they barely moved their eyes or eyebrows, almost seemed like robots...

The only animation mistake i noticed was the background clouds' loop, it suddently stops for half a second and restarts.

Great work here, hope to see more from you ;D

August 1, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks friend. yeah, i didn't put a ton of effort into the lypsyncing portion. that's why the jock hardly moves his body and i repeat a lot of the girl's animations. all true. could have been made to act a lot more human, but i was lazy and eager to move on.

and shit, that's some eye you've got spotting the error with the clouds... but when i went back and watched it again (focusing entirely on the clouds) i didn't notice the mistake you mentioned, it all ran smoothly.... not really sure why or how that could have happened, it was just a continuous tween across the entire scene.

ah well, anyway, glad to see you're still interested in my work :-)

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Score: 8
Monster's Dream

"HAH, WOW!"

submission: Monster's Dream
date: July 7, 2008

At LAST we get something worth of its score! this is excellent, i like the world you just did, it had so much atention in the background details and stuff, it looked very nice :D yet, i wish it was longer and had more stuff going on, it just feels too incomplete. i could easily count the actions in it :(

The music was great, very fitting :) im glad you choose audio portal songs, its great to give NG musicians some spotlight!

i hope to see more from this monster and from you :D you're very good!

July 7, 2008

Author's Response:

woo you said it all, yeah it's a bit short i defintitely feel you there, the next won't feel that way. as for the audio yeah it's surprising how much talent you can find on there? seriously you guys are crazy

but thanks lalo, ill get crackin on the next ones :D

-jones

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Score: 5
Sonic:The Ancient 1- Prt1

"booooring"

date: July 6, 2008

Another generic sonic-esque hedgehog with a different color as a character, mixed backgrounds from different games, some DBZ sounds, no own art whatsoever, not even custom sprites... this has been done before. and you left it incomplete for no reason since there was no deadline.

try harderrr next time :3 and make it longer and with a better plot.

July 7, 2008

Author's Response:

it finished like that for a cliff hanger, so there was a reason. It hasnt been done before, not that I have seen anyway

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Score: 6
What All OldPeople Can Do

"hah, nice!"

date: July 3, 2008

This one is actually good, just a bit short. its a real shame it has less score than that your dumb flash dancer test, i dont know whats going on with the viewers... it still has quite a high score tho, you shouldnt complain ;) this is no waterlollies.

July 3, 2008

Author's Response:

ha. ur a dick. thanks though. i'm glad everyone else has a different opinion than you about flash dancer. i put a shitload of hours into that

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Score: 5
Flash Dancer

"Nice!"

submission: Flash Dancer
date: July 2, 2008

It was funny, Nice way to show your skills. but you still have a long way to go. Hope to see something better from you next time ;) you got skills.

July 2, 2008

Author's Response:

ok thanks... a long way to go to where?

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Score: 7
Base 17 ::03::

"Im amazed :D"

submission: Base 17 ::03::
date: June 20, 2008

This looks very proffesional, more than any other anime series i have seen (which i dont like much by the way, but this one's good enough :D)

You did a great job with the camera angles, and decent work with the character animation, and overall its good, BUT theres much stuff you can improve, like:

- The backgrounds: they are lazily made, like just a couple of lines and solid colors. you should add shadows and details. i specially hated the last backgrounds from this chapter, they were just an open field with solid squares at the background, no real scene. work on them :)

-The character designs: I HATE stereotypical anime characters, and in this case, they all look alike exept for color changes. I wouldnt had complained if they were at least nicely designed, but MOST of your character haircuts are very ugly and lazy. I'm exagerating a bit, i cant help it... but seriously, work a bit more on them.

- Facial expressions: just move the eyes and eyebrows a bit, or make them blink so they dont look so much like robots.

The voices were great, i specially liked the dialogue at the end, it even has a message :) great work, hope to see more from you!

June 21, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank youuu! professional is too much for a pauper like me, eh?

...what?

But, thanks; backgrounds, haha. I shall try my best. I've always focused more on the characters, but backgrounds are important too, eh?

xD Somewhat true! Will work on that too.

-Totally agree with this point. Believe me, anything that has to do with character animation will be looked into and/or fixed.

I loved the voices, too! When I received them, I was like, 'Wow. These guys are awesome.'

Thanks again! Unless something large happens, I'll try to put it out before the end of the year!

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Score: 7
Final Fantasy Sonic X:Ep6

"clever concept"

date: June 15, 2008

I like how you combine the movie with a couple of minigames, i've seen it before but not implemented in such a good way... Yet, i think the story is just WAY too cheesy, i dont know if its on purpose but, the random appearances of videogame characters, and the super overused DBZ dialogue and sounds... its just not original...

also, the battle sequences are like SUPER exagerated, like sonic goes and takes his sword out and while hes in sayan mode phase 9 hes suspended in time giving punches and sword hits and running and then his kamekameha and super explosion and...

K its just me, i just dont like it being so exagerated cause i've seen this kind of stuff for a long time in NG. The minigames are great tho. the story, personally, isnt :C

June 15, 2008

Author's Response:

Ahh, it isnt random if you start from episode 1.

Also the only thing i used from DBZ sound effects are the teleport sounds. Everything else came from brawl. Also, you mentioned the Gigabreak, everything else stayed true to sonic, the sonic combo was NO WAy anything like DBZ.
Granted i didnt want to put the blast in at the end of it, but i couldnt figure out anyway to finish it. I dont like sonic doing blasts. Every move in the game, was true to SONICs abilities, not Dragonball Z...however there might be some instances.

Thanks for the review, glad ya enjoyed the minigame

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Score: 6
xXDarnells TimeXx

"Nice can shots"

submission: xXDarnells TimeXx
date: June 11, 2008

you definitely need to work with human shapes tho. Darnell's arm is all like flexed while hes shooting. that doesnt make sense, people stretch their arms forward when they're going to shoot. your animation is decent, it looks like you'll be able to improve much :)

June 12, 2008

Author's Response:

omg you really commented my moviee! thanks so much, drawing human shapes are realy difficult to me, but the part of darnell umm....i knew dat but i was trying to give it that ´n***a´ style....if you know what im sayin?

thnaks 4 the review

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Score: 6
GT - Monster Trainer

"OMG WOOT"

date: May 28, 2008

so here we have Gamer Tonight - Monster Training, another flash movie about videogames and part of its own series with a score of 4.3 and a review average of 9.5... seems a bit overrated.

ok so i like this series, i like videogame parodies, this one is nicely done even if its a bit short and dumb. its definitely audience appealing and very well done for the short time you had to do these for TV.

nice work, id like something new tho.

May 28, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah, I always say it's quite overrated myself. But all thats not really for me to decide, sadly.

The series finished as of 1 week ago, so what you're seeing now is just a backlog of the TV airings. After that's said and done it will become "something new".

Thanks for the review! :)

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