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Location: Veracruz MX
Job: Student/Animator
Lalo (pronounced Lah-lo by the way, and not Lay-lo) is the diminutive of Edward in spanish. Yeah I know it doesnt make sense at all. :B
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yeah one week my ass... it was a pretty lame screamer, if it had a different picture, not a pumkin, it would be much better.
there's not much to say...
Author's Response:
umm, i guess you didnt watch the whole thing then you idiot ?
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yeah its okay, its gonna get through the judgement for sure... but the filesize is too small, maybe you should add music or better quality to the mazes...
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i liked the style, i love these original movies and i LOVE THAT SONG.
you used the song wisely, almost perfectly synced with the movie.
awesome FBF actiol, although at the start it looked kinda ugly and when the character was far away he should have been a bit more detailed... oh and you could have taken less time if you had masked the stairs for example... not that complicated.
i liked it, it ROCKED, good work, i dont know why you are not proud of it :/
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funny, but its pointless :/ STOP DOIN THIS AND KEEP WORKING ON THE NEW BEHEMOTH GAME!! >:C
jk, but make it longer ^^
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DEFINITELY good, but i noticed some small details that kinda bothered me, specially when i saw the movie with headphones... at the "chorus", like the part when bitey was running through the yuyus, i didnt like those not so noticeable but bothering drums... it felt like they didnt sync nicely with the rest of the music...
awesome movements, exellent camera movement and the cloud thingie of yuyus was perfectly animated :O i liked how the terrain moved in bitey's sight camera part :)
another good detail was at the start when bitey goes down from his big jump out of the yuyus and he runs, he takes some grass off with his first running movement... and at the end some dust or some kind of smokes is flying out if his back... looks coooool!
keep it up!!!!!!!!
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but definitely the framerate was too low... you might be working at 12 frames per second... you should change it to 18 or even 24, that way your animation will look way smoother.
it was okay for a first movie, it will surely not get blammed.
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i liked it... but it was short and the graphics were not really good...
the sound was great, although i think you should have actually compressed it, it wasnt necesary to have that high audio quality.
graphics were simple... but not too animated... you should have made some more scenes or the character moving when ordering the taco... it would have been nice...
good humor, a bit stupid buy funny after all xD
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i think you OVERUSED the blur efect... my crappy computer couldnt stand so much blur and the animation freezed at some points... blur efect looks awesome, butit gets annoying after a while.
nice concept, although the graphics were not too good, pico's look suited perfectly to the story... whih i loved...
yeah i think those are the most critical points in your movie, everything else was cool, i liked the intro music, and some details i found here and there.
:D
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really good movie... what everyone was expecting :D
graphics are of your style, the gray outlines of the characters give them a different feel... it looks fresh or something XP
i loved how the music synced with the action... and there are many tributes and cameos in there, the locker full of things was a good idea.
good work, keep it up, we'll help eachother in the future
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i liked the storyline... although most of the graphics were not well done... like alien Hominid's ship... and some pico moves...
there are some nice details i liked... like SON jumping when talking to DAD... and some other things that were funny...
that "cheesy map" part was.. well... cheesy... pico was just moving around without changing position...
I LOVED THE HIDDEN SCENE hahahahahha...
good work... improve your graphics... and good luck!
Author's Response:
Yeah I know...the storyline was sweet and Alien Hominid's ship...Awful. Atleast I notice my mistakes.
Yes, Cheesy Map was cheepy.
Thanks man... I think I need a Drawing Tablet XD,
best regards man,
-Rudy
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