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Location: Veracruz MX
Job: Student/Animator
Lalo (pronounced Lah-lo by the way, and not Lay-lo) is the diminutive of Edward in spanish. Yeah I know it doesnt make sense at all. :B
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nice comeback luis, you still have your FBF goodness. i liked how you animated the bouncin tities of the fat lady :) front page almost instantly i see, good work!
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well it was good, it was definitely epic, well done with movie esque shots and stuff, the bad thing is that the sprites lacked movement, they had like 2 or 3 frames pretty much. still, you did a good work, you totally deserve front page :)
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it was nice, good song and yes i think its true too. still, the graphics could,ve been better, you forgot to color the top peak of the surf board also. and too many epilepsia-esque moments, half of them werent needed. still, good work, i hope to see you improved soon.
Author's Response:
Glad yu liked it. Ye I made a few mistakes with color xP Ill resubmit with fixes tomorrow hopefully, k?
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"MMMH you should have submitted the whole thing..."
its too short, if this was a test then it should've been in the NG alphas... too bad you cant use them right now...
oh well i got nothing to complain about, just the graphics that are too simple and kinda ugly. nice engine tho, i liked the game.
Author's Response:
Okay thanks!
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ya i also use capt falco, i consider myself good enough but damn, i only use the knee in critical times, i dont usually shorthop and then knee but it sure looks useful, this taught me alot, thanks shawn : )
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it starts nicely, with some supense, and then the action suposedly starts, but thats where the problem arises. the action goes too slow, its supossed to go with the rythm of the music but it should've gone 2X fast at least..
i specially loved when the penilian appeared, what a good sequence man! and then when pico shoots it in the head, nice one too, good job in those ones...
so its pretty much good, excellent work at the FBF sequences, the bad thing is the pace of the movie pretty much :C
good job, hope to see more from you soon :)
Author's Response:
Gracias bro, y muchas gracias por tu ayuda, la neta me ayudaste un chingo.
Igualmente, anima mas!
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it was pretty good, you did a terrific jub with the FBF sequences and the details, i specially loved the first scene and that funny scene when pico suddently grabs nene, kisses her and throws her away like a asian bag of meat LOL
so its pretty good but honestly you should have made a better work with the music, it was so bland, ok it was good enough in the first and second parts but in the pirate sequence it was just too out of place, i nver felt excitement and i never saw the real climax of the movie, so animation = awesomeness music = not enough
and the uzi gunshot sound was too crappy :P
^_^
Author's Response:
I think the Uzi sound in Pico's Unloaded was actually an AK47. Uzi's don't fire big rounds, and the sounds we used were 'authentic' :)
Also, we're not action animators. This is coming from a pair of comedians, so if that doesn't impress you, then maybe next year our cartoon will shoot out hundred dollar bills ;)
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good work, i really liked your theme and what you showed was the reality of being a popstar hehe... i really liked the ending.
it was well animated, maybe some tweens seemed a bit lazy, for example those oval shaped arms and some other details that could be done differently... it still has escellent style.. although you couldve made it a bit longer therere were some stuff bout popstart you forgot to mention i think
good music, could've been more elaborated but its definitely good.
im voting for ya, godo luck :)
Author's Response:
Shhhhh! Don't mention the oval arms! :P (I was lazy) heh.
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i got a bit pissed when i saw that levels 2.1, 2.2, etc were the same from level one with changed obstacles... i would have liked to see more variety in there.
the game itself is excellent, the graphics were nice but way too repetitive, i was getting bored of seeing the same pipes and blocks from the start of the level... it would appeal more if it hade more variety, maybe different obstacles and platforms.
about the music, i loved those remixes, but i use headphones and the volume is way too high, specially that sound when you hit the blocks >_< needed an ON/OFF switch or a volume slider maybe...
finally, i found some glitches in the menu... maybe its just me but none of the butons worked there aside from PLAY and the INSTRUCTIONS and CHARACTERS butons... inside of these 2 last mennus i could do nothing, if i clicked anything they just slided down again to show me the main menu...
overall good. i would love to see the next bullet bill with more variety :) i mean, this one would be okay if it had less levels but 4 level desings repeating themselves 8 TIMES? the cool thing was the boss at the end of each world but i did not have enough patiente to play the same levels to get to it...
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you have an awesome style... its like a chubbier kind of anime... i love it.
the movie was nice, good story great characters, excellent sound and voices. it looked a bit sketchy, then i asimilated that that was your style... nad it actually worked :)
good luck in future projects.
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