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Location: Veracruz MX
Job: Student/Animator
"lalo" (pronounced Lah-lo by the way, and not Lay-lo) is Edward's diminutive in spanish. yeah i know it doesnt make sense at all. :)
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Great music, nice atmosphere and an excellent work at animation. It was pretty much just a bit of lipsync, but i loved it, it was very expressive :D
As for the actual story and message, its all true :C i LOVED it, best satirical flash to be submitted to newgrounds! great work rtil!
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Nothing new, for some reason it wasnt as funny as the rest of the awesome movies, i felt it was a bit slower and less crazy, specially after watching awesome gaiden. the new joke wasnt that cool :C i liked the ending tho.
And about the easter egg, i preffer the original one, even if it had less animation, it was way more expressive :)
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2 twenty second shorts i have seen dozens of times and one new, i like it.
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At LAST we get something worth of its score! this is excellent, i like the world you just did, it had so much atention in the background details and stuff, it looked very nice :D yet, i wish it was longer and had more stuff going on, it just feels too incomplete. i could easily count the actions in it :(
The music was great, very fitting :) im glad you choose audio portal songs, its great to give NG musicians some spotlight!
i hope to see more from this monster and from you :D you're very good!
Author's Response:
woo you said it all, yeah it's a bit short i defintitely feel you there, the next won't feel that way. as for the audio yeah it's surprising how much talent you can find on there? seriously you guys are crazy
but thanks lalo, ill get crackin on the next ones :D
-jones
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i liked the concept of the white line and things coming out of it, its great and worked out really well with this song, with all the birds and the cool animations, specially the one in which the humans start becoming older and older as the camera movies right. yet, some drawings could had been much better, more stylish. also, some more sync with the music and more eye-candy would had helped too : )
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Another generic sonic-esque hedgehog with a different color as a character, mixed backgrounds from different games, some DBZ sounds, no own art whatsoever, not even custom sprites... this has been done before. and you left it incomplete for no reason since there was no deadline.
try harderrr next time :3 and make it longer and with a better plot.
Author's Response:
it finished like that for a cliff hanger, so there was a reason. It hasnt been done before, not that I have seen anyway
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This was a great movie, it had excellent animation and music! I cant believe you did the music and sould effects yourself! Its AMAZING!!!! Thank you for submitting it to newgrounds :)
Yet, it has many flaws. I cant complain much about the animation, but the backgrounds could had used some work and optimization, specially at the beggining. Also, the fence was badly drawn. you can press shift while painting a brush line to make it perefectly straight. either horizontal or vertical :) Maybe some of the jokes were a bit lame but its a homage so its understandable.
Its a shame this is not getting the attention it deserves. its not your fault, its just that the Ng audience is used to another kind of humor...
hope you get frontpge :D!!!!!!!!!
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This one is actually good, just a bit short. its a real shame it has less score than that your dumb flash dancer test, i dont know whats going on with the viewers... it still has quite a high score tho, you shouldnt complain ;) this is no waterlollies.
Author's Response:
ha. ur a dick. thanks though. i'm glad everyone else has a different opinion than you about flash dancer. i put a shitload of hours into that
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this one was funnier than the other eddsworld movies. some of the jokes were a bit lame but overall it was fonny enough. you got better with the character expressions too! the only bad thing i can notice is the quality of the graphics. you could try and improve them a bit, maybe add some shading ;)
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It was funny, Nice way to show your skills. but you still have a long way to go. Hope to see something better from you next time ;) you got skills.
Author's Response:
ok thanks... a long way to go to where?
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