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Lalo
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Attempt

Posted by Lalo - April 13th, 2008


Artistic attempt, done in a couple of minutes. subject's left hand is weirdly drawn and he is also very anorexic :) Spare the picture quality for it was taken with a 1.3 MegaPixel cellphone camera.

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It looks really good and the pose is really nice to.

<3 thnx

That's not bad at all! You've got a great style.
Is this part of an animation or were you just doodling when you came up with this?
You could trace it in Flash and experiment with him moving about.
He looks like he should have his own cartoon!

LOL, i have tought of that actually! i think hes a very good flash model to practice body animation and stuff.

It looks like he's re-enacting one of Shakespeare's plays.

I realized that while tinting it :P

not bad.. gettin better

thaaaaanks <3!

That's pretty cool, my fav bit is the cheek bone for some reason. Your hands are also very good, I suck at hands.

Whenever I draw I often make mistakes, but for constructive purposes I'll just point them out for this?

The outstretched arm is quite geometric, needs to be more curvy like the arm hanging.

The leg pointing towards us, the upper thigh is not in the correct position as the shin. The upper thigh looks like it is facing the same direction as the the other leg.

Its still cool though.

: ) thanks for pointing em out.

Gettin worse. change careers.

never

looks like my dick.

Nay I like it, is that just totally pen and ink with no pencil sketch at all?

I did a quick sketch before and then inked over.

I did the style. I think the hands look alright but my biggest gripe is with the waist and where the hips connect to the torso. That part doesn't look natural enough.

Besides that, keep it up.

I didnt want to detail it much, thats why it looks like that

Very nice pose, his right foot looks kind of off but that's besides the point. I like the shading and the shadow, it's simple but effective. The nose might be a little too big, or so it seems.

its kinda big but i consider it part of the style... or maybe i have a problem doing my human drawings too nosey :)